User talk:Sangatfoundationcap/draft
Request edit for "Foundation Capital"
[edit]I previously attempted to rewrite the entire page and have since realized that isn't going to work. Therefore, I'd like to just ask Wikipedia to remove some of the erroneous, unsourced content on the page, which is what drew me to participate with a COI. My requests are as follows:
- Delete the third paragraph of the History section, because it is promotional, has no citations, and is partially erroneous.
- Delete the last sentence of the History section, because it is erroneous and not supported by the given citation
- Delete the second paragraph of the Programs section, because it has no citations and no longer active (or move to History if you do find citations, but I do not believe there are any available)
- Consider removing the banner tag at the top for lack of citations, presuming enough unsourced content has now been deleted.
I also plan to replace the logo image, presuming nobody opposes. Regarding the draft I shared here, I do not plan to spend any more time on it, but I'll leave it there in case an editor finds it useful in the future. 24.4.139.26 (talk) 22:10, 23 April 2021 (UTC)