User talk:Sammiek/sandbox

Good article about the view of marxist feminists. I added some commentary in lowercase (to make it distinct from your work) because I didn't want to delete or change any major phrasing, so you can work on these issues as you want to without me disrupting your article. Additional sources outside of Feminist Theory might be helpful to back up your argument. A scholar.google search for "marxist feminist theory" could offer potential resources. I corrected minor grammatical errors and typos without comment, but your phrasing in general is very neutral and constructive. SophieKriegerowski (talk) 21:21, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Kat's Edits: In materialist determinism paragraph there are three typos: corporation not cooperation

Not only are women's bodies seen as commodities or objects in the line of production, but sexual harassment and assault also takes place on the production floor especially in low-wage factories. Women are denied reproductive freedom in the workforce but are also sexually exploited. See Gender in Production by Leslie Salzinger. Sexual freedom and agency is violated in the workforce in multiple ways.

Expand and clarify/reword what you mean here: "Corporations are able to distance themselves from those who work within their system to create capital for them"

Reword Sub title: Feminist Theory in Comparison and the ERA

The last paragraph: Politics of inclusion do not end inequality...we have seen many women enter the workforce only to be met with wage gaps, sexual harassment, and the limited accommodations of access to contraception or pregnancy. *Power hierarchies have stayed the same, but the forms of oppression have change to meet new social conditions of women in the workplace. This paragraph needs to be polished and reworded in some areas

Expand on cultural feminism

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kathryn Lyle (talk • contribs) 23:32, 8 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]