User talk:SGurmu/Peace Park (Seattle)
Preliminary Review from Kaylea
[edit]Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!
I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.
I also notice you've left yourself quite a few notes -- it sounds like you have lots of good ideas on how to make this article shine. Keep on rolling with this!
Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:53, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Go Live Approval
[edit]Hi @SGurmu:
You are approved to go live with this article. One thing to fix is the images section, with the way it's laid out right now it's very chunky. Maybe a section with all your sentences on current conditions and then a Gallery template? Or you could add your condition notes as captions to the photos, since they're short.
- Final read-through draft.
- Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
- Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
- Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
- Note on article talk page.
- Note at the top of your sandbox version.
- Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
- Celebrate!
Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:51, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
Final Version
[edit]My updates are complete and the live version of the article is up! This was so fun! SGurmu (talk) 23:42, 12 February 2022 (UTC)