User talk:Ride or die baby/sandbox

Apparently I was supposed to be reviewing your article. Sorry about that. Looks like you have some good articles and ideas. Just elaborate on them and move them to the main space when you can.Wikied007 (talk) 15:32, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Looks like you are doing a good job adding more detail.Wikied007 (talk) 15:38, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good job getting your editing started. Keep it up.Wikied007 (talk) 00:34, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I see you have added a bunch of details concerning what you will add to your article. That looks like it would make a great contribution to the article. However, I didn't see and mention of adding a figure. Don't forget to do that. Maybe you could add a picture for the pharmacology section. You can look through the wiki commons for ideas.Wikied007 (talk) 04:42, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

One more thing you could add if you wanted to is a "see also" section. I noticed that a lot of Wikipedia pages have one, but yours does not. Basically you just add some related articles as a list at the end such as "voltage-gated channel" or something like that.Wikied007 (talk) 05:13, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I think your article might benefit from a little bit added to the introduction paragraph. It's concise, which is good, but I feel like a little more background could be added in if you wanted to keep the article balanced with what you are going to add into the other sections.Wikied007 (talk) 16:52, 30 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]