User talk:Richiewayne/Shear Thickening Fluids (Dilatants)
You are off to a good start. Concentrate now on finding data in secondary sources; a table showing viscosity at different shear rates for a variety of materials would be great. Figures such as a schematic showing how STF work and chemical structures would be great too. Hagen76 (talk) 23:04, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
Draft Review
[edit]| Required Element | Not Present | Present-Needs Much Work | Present-Acceptable |
|---|---|---|---|
| Introductory paragraph | should be summary of entire article accessible to someone who has taken thermodynamics, but little else | ||
| At least three sections in the main body | yes, but need extensive text addition | ||
| At least three original figures | need one more original | ||
| At least one original data table | x | ||
| At least two properly formatted mathematical equations | x | ||
| At least 4 in-text links to other Wikipedia articles | x | ||
| At least 8 references in your endnotes | need several more (4 and 5 are a single ref |