User talk:Rhein o/sandbox
The information provided in your draft is coherent, you are speaking of her experience of both a female and an artist. The sources that you have utilized are appropriate, but do not forget to add the page numbers referenced. Your section does not seem to have any bias, you are explaining her struggles and ways in which she continued her passion as an artist. If you add more information on her limitations as a female artist and how she bypassed such limitations your contribution will provide not only a stronger article, but it will also coincide with major themes of the course. When speaking of her paintings, I believe you can cite them as primary sources. Also, you could strengthen the section by adding more information of her utilizing art as a form of rebellion. You have coherence, good sources and a neutral stance, you just need a bit of information that can provide a greater depth of understanding.