User talk:Rezuschlag
Great job! Your draft was really interesting. You stayed neutral which is pretty easy when writing about mice and you incorporated sources well. I would work on a few minor issues, one being that your lead is mostly about how the mice look and their physical traits. It may benefit you to put a senate about each topic you wrote about, it can be vague considering the reader gets more information in the actual subtopic. Your coverage was pretty stable which is awesome. Your article may benefit from a final sentence in the endanger category about the future of silky mice. Overall you did a great job and I really like the way you added a photo! Hallehoward (talk) 17:23, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for your input! I added a small section at the beginning based on the original article, and then I researched into the endangerment a bit more, and this year they actually moved its endangerment status, so I'm glad I looked into it more, and fixed the article.
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