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Peer Review of Group 9 (NDKs)
[edit]Dear Group 9,
This article is overall well written and discusses topics in the appropriate level of technical detail for this assignment. In the "Structures" section, it may be helpful to add a visual diagram to aid the concise descriptions of the structure of NDKs. The "Fuctions" Section is also written very clearly, the bullet pointed step by step mechanism is easy to understand and explains the ping pong mechanism well. The sentences following this bullet pointed mechanism in so many words reiterates what the section has already done a great job explaining. Consider removing some of the redundant explanation in this section as the point is properly made in this section, but also overstated. In the "NDPKs in Cancer" section, consider removing the first sentence as this is a fairly specific section and the general notions of NDKs have already been introduced. Additionally, consider rearranging the page so that the section on "Nme1 suppressing metastasis" is either adjacent to or combined with the "NDKs in Cancer" section.
Blake Carlson.