User talk:Redem444748464
Baien Tomlin Article
[edit]hi , thanks for oyur advice , ill attempt to make the suggested changes , perhpas yoy could look at it again when im done.
Hey there, and welcome to Wikipedia! I noticed you just created an article on Baien Tomlin. It is very good of you to suggest areas of improvement. However, you need to try to follow grammar rules, and remember, the article name is always displayed at the top of the page, so you do not need to put in a header. Check out the Manual of Style, and use the Sandbox for experiments. Again, welcome. Oldlaptop321 (talk) 13:51, 17 March 2009 (UTC)