User talk:Qaniaf/Addison Rae
Hi @Qaniaf: great work on your article so far! You've found some good sources and expanded the "Personal life" section. I don't have a lot else to suggest at this point. Only that you might look at other articles on infuencers or celebrities to come up with more ideas about what sections you might add to the article. I'm really excited to see how your article develops! Groceryheist (talk) 00:43, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
Round 2 feedback
[edit]Hi @Qaniaf:, Sarahhelennicholson and TylerOliver7 have left you helpful feedback and ideas in their peer reviews. I agree with them that are making good progress and your efforts have considerably improved the article. When you started working on the article it was rated as wp:start-class and I think you've definitely brought it closer to wp:c-class. I want to highlight what I see as the most important things that you should address before publishing your article.
First, I strongly agree with TylerOliver7 that you should be careful to maintain an encyclopedic tone and neutral point of view throughout the article. This kind of article can be subject to scrutiny and may be seen as at risk for being overly self-promotional. To this point Sarahhelennicholson left you very detailed feedback on some specific problematic sentences. I strongly encourage you to take her advice and apply it to the entire article (not just your additions).
Second I think that the article probably needs just a little more information and depth to reach c-class. In my first round of feedback I suggested looking to other articles on celebrities for ideas about what sections to add. I also suspect that there's more information in the sources that you've already found that could be useful additions. Here's a how-to guide for mining sources for information.
Finally, I suggest you take a look at my page on polishing your article for ideas for your next round of work on this project. I especially think that doing things like adding wikilinks, "also see" links, categories, and external links are good things to do when polishing an article.
By the way. It looks like the article on Addison Rae is wp:semi-protected meaning that you must have wp:autoconfirmed to edit it. Getting autoconfirmed status is pretty easy. You just have to make 10 edits to encyclopaedia articles. Just browse some stubs and fix grammar and typos to earn the status before you are ready to publish your article.
Please reach out to me when you're ready for another round of feedback or you think you're ready to make your article live by publishing it in the mainspace. Nice work so far! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this ends up.