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Deletion discussion about Berk Tarakçıoğlu

Hello, Px7009, and welcome to Wikipedia. I edit here too, under the username BoyTheKingCanDance, and I thank you for your contributions.

I wanted to let you know, however, that I've started a discussion about whether an article that you created, Berk Tarakçıoğlu, should be deleted, as I am not sure that it is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia in its current form. Your comments are welcome at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Berk Tarakçıoğlu.

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BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 02:57, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

Thank you for your input about the article. I totally understand and trying to improve it.

Px7009 (talk) 03:12, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi my friend Px7009, I actually looked myself for other reliable and published third-party sources with which to strengthen it, but couldn't find them. I found lots of social media profiles, etc, but we can't use them on Wikipedia. Good luck. Best regards, BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 03:16, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

No worries, I am considering to remove the article and come back when there is enough sources if it is a possiblity or should i wait for the deletion of the article? I think i was just too eager to write one. Don't want to do any mistakes.

Px7009 (talk) 03:26, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You could wait and see how it plays out. No harm in doing so. Other editors might even find sources that I didn't see. BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 03:29, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

Hello,I did some changes in the article accordingly to your warnings, would you knidly update the tags or remove them as an user without a conflict of interest. Still looking for reliable secondary sources but just wanted to check if i am going with right direction.

Thank you,

Px7009 (talk) 21:13, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi my friend, I'm sorry, but you're not yet even close. I can't remove any of the templates and the deletion discussion will run its course. Best regards, BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 01:45, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

Thank you for your input, I will try my best in deletion process.

Would you help me to understand what was the issue with this part?

Tarakcıoğlu ~~has worked as an event photographer during the early stages of his career, gaining valuable experience in the field~~. Later on, he graduated from Maltepe University's Department of Cartoon and Animation. Throughout his career, he has explored various art forms, including photography, and has shown a keen interest in NFTs (Non-Fungible Tokens) since 2021.

I was quoting directly from this link which is the same cite with the current one.

Biz Kimiz Projesi’nde yer alan bir diğer isim Berk Tarakcıoğlu. Maltepe üniversitesi çizgi film ve animasyon bölümü mezunu olan Berk Tarakcıoğlu, fotoğrafın dışında çeşitli sanat dallarında üretim yapmış olup 2021 yılından itibaren NFT hakkında bilgi toplayıp bu bilgileri başkalarıyla paylaşmayı görev edinmiştir. En son İstanbul Comics and Arts Festival’da NFT hakkında söyleşi yapmış ve aktif olarak sosyal medya üzerinde bu paylaşımını kr0wd isimli topluluğun altında devam ettirmektedir.

and direct translation of the part is

Another person involved in the "Who Are We" Project is Berk Tarakcıoğlu. Berk Tarakcıoğlu, a graduate of Maltepe University's Cartoon and Animation department, has created works in various art branches besides photography and has made it his mission to gather information about NFTs and share this knowledge with others since 2021. Most recently, he gave a talk about NFTs at the Istanbul Comics and Arts Festival and continues to share actively on social media under the community named kr0wd.

I couldn't understand why the part is deleted.

Px7009 (talk) 02:12, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You have to present a neutral point of view. You can't editorialise or make value judgments. You can't also say things that aren't in sources, and if they are in sources but the sources don't present a neutral viewpoint it is necessary to provide that nautrality or balance. I can see that you're struggling to create a decent page. That's normal for a first article. Here's a few tips. The general information on new page creation found HERE and especially HERE may help you, as may the referencing for beginners tutorial. Two good sets of Wikipedia guidelines that I have found really useful can be found HERE, regarding verifiability and HERE, regarding the need to maintain a neutral point of view. You might also want to take a quick look at Wikipedia's list of policies and guidelines. I hope this helps. Good luck. BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 02:15, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

I understand, would this be more balanced way to use the source information?

Tarakcıoğlu is a graduate of Maltepe University's Department of Cartoon and Animation. Throughout his career, he has explored various art forms, including photography. His interest in in NFTs (Non-Fungible Tokens) began in 2021.

also please let me know if I am asking too much from you. This is my first time to write and I don't have anyone in the community to guide me trough. Don't want to use your politeness and ask too many questions.

Px7009 (talk) 02:41, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BoyTheKingCanDance:

Just saw the edit you made and the links you are provided thank you so much. I will look at them.

Px7009 (talk) 02:44, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That one sentence is worded better, yes. But the main problem remains notability. You (or Berk Tarakçıoğlu if it's not you) simply don't yet seem notable enough. That may of course change in the future. The best way for us to proceed is to wait for the outcome of the Articles for Deletion discussion. I'm making the assumption that your Conflict of Interest declaration on your user page means that you're writing about yourself or someone close to you. According to Wikipedia's Conflict of Interest policy, "you are strongly discouraged from editing affected articles directly". Please look at this policy. It gives guidance on how you can contribute to an article on yourself or someone close without writing any or all of the article yourself. Best regards, BoyTheKingCanDance (talk) 02:56, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]