User talk:Pji2013/sandbox
Fact and Grammar Check Citations look good. Several grammar issues. You need a period in the 2nd sentence of your last paragraph before your citation. In the fourth sentence of the same paragraph, get rid of "often" and add a comma after apoptosis. Lastly, there are 2 "and"s in your 6th sentence. Other than that looks good! Rever004 (talk) 22:36, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
Grammar Check
Section well structured and valid, has proper citations for all sentences. Just a couple changes in wording in my opinion could strengthen the work....
In the third sentence "DNA fragments can also be detected in cells that underwent necrosis, but when these DNA fragments are visualized after separation there is no clear "ladder" pattern present." I would change the word "underwent" to "cells that have undergone neurosis" and also the comma could be changed to a semi colin and the word "but" could be changed to although and delete the word 'when'. You may also want to change the first two words "DNA fragments" to DNA fragmentation, for the fragmentation is the process seen on the gel. Full sentence edit is as follows... "DNA fragmentation can also be detected in cells that have undergone necrosis; although these DNA fragments are visualized after separation there is no clear "ladder" pattern present."
Next.... paragraph 2, sentence 2.... "DNA laddering can also be used to see if cells underwent apoptosis in the presence of a virus. [3] This is useful because it can help determine the effects a virus has on a cell." Edit suggestion is as follows..... "DNA laddering can be used to determine if cells have undergone apoptosis in the presence of a virus as well."
Next... Paragraph 3 "DNA laddering can only be used to detect apoptosis during the later stages of apoptosis. This is due to DNA fragmentation taking place in a later stage of the apoptosis process.[2] DNA laddering is used to test for apoptosis of many cells, and is not accurate at testing for only a few cells that committed apoptosis. [2] To enhance the accuracy in testing for apoptosis, other assays are used along with DNA laddering such as TEM and TUNEL. [2] With recent improvements to DNA laddering, DNA laddering has become a more reliable, and reasonable technique to use when detecting apoptosis.[4] It is also important to note that DNA laddering occurs differently depending on the type of cell, so there may be slight changes in the process of DNA laddering depending on the cell that is being investigated. [5] .....
Change the second 'apoptosis' to 'programmed cell death', don't want to repeat yourself on the word 'apoptosis' in the first sentence! Sentence 3... Get rid of the period between 'cells' and 'and'... Sentence 5... get rid of the second 'DNA laddering' in its place put 'it... Sentence 6.. nothing! Great additions and edits, don't forget to have periods after end of sentence and before citations! Good work! TeleomerePeer —Preceding undated comment added 01:54, 7 November 2016 (UTC)