User talk:Phoenix Koren

Hello, Phoenix Koren! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions to this free encyclopedia. If you decide that you need help, check out Getting Help below, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking

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Your edits to Halo: Combat Evolved

I have reverted your additions to the setting section. In my opinion, the additional elaboration isn't really needed for a good understanding of the main plot; Wikipedia isn't for retelling stories in high levels of detail. The shorter version is probably sufficient. Ifyou want to make a case for the additional wording, please raise it at Talk:Halo: Combat Evolved so that we can discuss. — TKD::Talk 06:07, 15 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

If you were trying to fix the reason that the Spartans were unable to turn the tide of war, I simplified the wording and left it at "unable". For the backstory section, that level of detail is going to be fine, I think. — TKD::Talk 06:20, 15 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]