User talk:Petergriffin9901/Archive 14
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Run the World video
Hi Nathan. I hope you are fine. If you are not too busy, may i ask you to craft a section for the video which will talk about its content, i mean the dance influences etc. Please let me know. Jivesh • Talk2Me 15:25, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Please please please participate here. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:38, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Yes, i have very good ones. Should i give them to you? Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:40, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Should i also give you the links foe the teasers. They have a lot of information.
And please see if you can craft a better synopsis as well. I know i am asking for too much but i will be very very very very very happy if you could do that for me. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:43, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
All the sources i am giving you have important points but it depends on how you are going to fit them in the music video section. That's the real challenge. I think there are too many costume changes. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:46, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Well i do not know if i can cal that epic. But what is for sure is that i enjoyed the video but i did not like the ending. It was too simple. I do not want to get hyperexcited but the song has surged from #173 to #38 on iTunes. If you want more sources to expand the synopsis, have a look at the music video section for 'background'. It has many references about the teasers from MTV news and much more. They may help a lot. Thanks for everything Nathan,. I hope i am not boring you. Jivesh • Talk2Me 19:09, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I am off to bed now. I am so impatient to see your work tomorrow. Take care. See you. I know you will leave me amazed with what you will do. Jivesh • Talk2Me 19:10, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
I have left more links and please take notes that several critics are saying that the video has a "post-apocalypse/Mad Max-style" I do not know about that but it should be important. It could fit in the "Content" section i asked you for. I saw you have already started to write the synopsis. Thanks. The video has received a lot of coverage. I do not know how you will fir all these information: by making a separate content section or simply fitting everything in the synopsis but i think two separate sections will be good. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:00, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you very much Nathan. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:57, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Please put your two cents into the jukebox. I Help, When I Can. [12] 22:47, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
TEOM
Would this be a good addition? Novice7 (talk) 13:30, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi, Jivesh Here
Hi Nathan. Haven't heard form you since so long my friend.... Are you fine? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:33, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- Wow, people are now being blocked for reverting vandalism. Where is Wikipedia heading? Incredible!!!! I am fine. For the first time, i have to say i do not like a Beyonce song. It's too slow for me. May be if it had more music, it would have been great. What do you think about it? Do you want to me to cheer you up? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:41, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- I have yo go for now. I will be back later. But before i go, i want you to know that you will always have my support. I also like Lady GaGa. I do not know what happened to her saxophone player. Didn't watch the performance? Here is what will cheer you up. Sorry for being like cyclone (coming and going as quickly. Lol.) Please try to understand, i have an emergency. I will be back much later. Do tell me how you like the video? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:54, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Hey
Oh yessss I am a massive fan of Mariah. I would like to join :) calvin999 (talk) 13:38, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Review completed (i believe), please message me once the issue are completed as i do not watch subpages; thank you. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 07:34, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Takeback on my page and on the review page. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 19:14, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Question
What do you mean by copy-edited? calvin999 (talk) 16:05, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Ok thanks. I have addressed 4 of your points (I hope lol). The 4 points about the Prose part. You said about the expansion of the Background and Release part, but I have done many a google search about how the song came about, the concept and thought behind it etc. but I can't find anything apart from that it is about the media, or about how the Britney Remix came about. So I'm not sure what else you want in that section? calvin999 (talk) 20:45, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
iTunes
Gosh it really pisses me off when people write about selling a song at iTunes.... and I archived a few of the undated messages on your talk page (two of them by me sorry :P). Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:44, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I will probably buy 4 (on June 27 lol). I like RTW for its agression and catchiness, although it's depressing when I listen to "Pon de Floor" and realise how much of it has been sampled (I prefer to live in ignorance lol). I'm glad that those fucking amazing performances (excuse my language) lifted RTW (#9 here this week). "1+1" is beautiful, but I'm not sure that it will do well as everyone wants the dancey mush. "End of Time" is alright... but "Best Thing.." is pretty good. I like it better than "If I Were" and "Listen", which I think it is similar to, but it's definitely no Irreplaceable or Single Ladies. Meh, maybe it'll grow on me. Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:54, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yup, all of the other performances were crap at the BB awards. Kesha started good on "Animal", but then on "Blow", well... let's not go there. "Blow" is one of the few songs where I like the autotune. RiRi and Brit sucked, especially as they relied on sluttiness. I have developed a significant dislike for R after S&M (ew), although I must say that "Raining Men" and "Man Down" are nice cuts. I'll look up her performance now. TBEP are dead to me, as you know, and I find the Far East Movement are quite cheap. I love Nicki, but she sucked and then Brit came out to make absolutely sure that people that know that she can't dance or sing live (sorry). From what I've heard so far on Born This Way is muck, except "You and I" and "Judas". I must admit that I'm liking JLO f/ Weezy's "I'm Into You", though. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:12, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
Lol
This made me laugh lol, i dont get insulted over someone's opinion goof ;) (unlike most people on here *doesn't state specific name of user i am not fond of* =P) - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 22:52, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Lol, I knew you'd see that ;) all of us here are big talk page stalkers Hehe. I actually know who you're referring to lol :) Its cool though that you're going to see her in concert. Which date? I saw MC for the first time last year :) I became a fan just after she came in 2006 :S. So are you into Bieber too? Who are your other musical interests?--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 05:15, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Bahaha yeah well i guess i dont hide my opinion very well, im somewhat blunt which rubs some people the wrong way xP . I like a few songs by Bieber, i wouldn't exactly call myself a fan, his music is too girl oriented for me, once he changes his genre more to an Usher vibe ill probably like him. Alright who have i seen in concert; Shania Twain, Evanescence, Linkin Park, Britney Spears (when i was like 8), Black Eyed Peas, Christina Aguilera, Pussycat Dolls. And music wise im into Pop mainly but thats a huge range (Adele - 3 Days Grace). So my music range is quite big =P. Im seeing Ke$ha on September 9, 2011. How about you? - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 08:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Haha I know :P You're a feisty one :) Wow, I actually like your taste! I mainly listen to pop. I don't like Bieber's music as you said, but he's a pretty cool kid, so I don't mind him at all. My main one is Mariah Carey, and I also love Celine and Whitney. I like all the ones you mentioned, and love Britney and am starting to like Gaga :) I like Beyonce also, but am very disappointed by her new album. I actually am thinking of going to see the FF tour with a friend, but am worried Brit will pull the same shenanigans that she's been pulling recently :( Idk, I might take the chance lol.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 20:14, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Bahaha yeah well i guess i dont hide my opinion very well, im somewhat blunt which rubs some people the wrong way xP . I like a few songs by Bieber, i wouldn't exactly call myself a fan, his music is too girl oriented for me, once he changes his genre more to an Usher vibe ill probably like him. Alright who have i seen in concert; Shania Twain, Evanescence, Linkin Park, Britney Spears (when i was like 8), Black Eyed Peas, Christina Aguilera, Pussycat Dolls. And music wise im into Pop mainly but thats a huge range (Adele - 3 Days Grace). So my music range is quite big =P. Im seeing Ke$ha on September 9, 2011. How about you? - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 08:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Lady Gaga BTW
Regarding this: the reason I reverted it from the article is because it never stated that the album has sold 2 million copies. It said that 2.1 million were already shipped to retailers, to be sold (haven't even been certified yet). The article was published 3 days after the albums release, so it could not have known about certifications so early. Also, the second source linked back to Wikipedia. =)
PS:Thanks for your input at Adele's album FA. Much appreciated. =) Orane (talk) 07:56, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, I understand how Gaga-related articles can be frustrating. Her "little monsters" can be so relentless. Well, I'm not back completely. Have to do summer school all summer :( It seems like I have midterms every damn week lol.
- I know it's hard writing a FA, especially music related articles. The first article that I tried to bring to FA status was "We Belong Together", many years ago. It failed :( But, keep at it. And one day it will be a success. Orane (talk) 22:21, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Review will begin soon, in the next few days. look out for a reply. — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 01:33, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you my friend :) Take your time.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 03:24, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Have some initial stuff about the infobox and introduction. Will do some more later in the week. In the meantime if you could take care of Talk:MTV Unplugged (Mariah Carey EP)/GA1. :) (hope you're well btw). — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 00:53, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- The review is complete. There are some pending changes after which the article will be passed, as it is generally a well written informative piece of work. — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 00:53, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Have some initial stuff about the infobox and introduction. Will do some more later in the week. In the meantime if you could take care of Talk:MTV Unplugged (Mariah Carey EP)/GA1. :) (hope you're well btw). — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 00:53, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Why thank you Unique boy :) I'll get to it pronto!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 07:27, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Improvements to S&M Article
Hi, I've read your GA review and have addressed your points, I was wondering if you would be able to go over it before I submit for GA again and tell me of any outstanding issues? calvin999 (talk) 19:00, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. (I already nominated it lol) calvin999 (talk) 12:34, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Help!
Hello Nathan! Nice to see ya around. I know you stay in Miami, FL. I was wondering if your local library had the book The Instrumentalist volume 41 (does your library come up on searching here?) If so, can you please get it for me? Psst, do they allow scanning? I don't think they would, but if they do, can you scan the page of "How Will I Know" for me? If possible, Modern Drummer volume 12 ([1]) too. Thanks in advance! Novice7 (talk) 12:50, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- Lol yes! I will leave, that's for sure... Maybe by July :) By the time, we can complete Charmbracelet :) I wanna do a major revamp of "How Will I Know" and those books can be really useful... Thanks. Novice7 (talk) 04:13, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- No, I just gave a notice to Adabow. I'll surely let you know when I leave :D Well, I'll be joining an engineering college soon and as you know, they just kill your mind, lol. I won't be able to concentrate on Wiki work... And, you're doing BG, Music and lyrics, Critical, chart? Novice7 (talk) 04:40, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks! For Modern Drummer, it's 0194-4533 and for The Instrumentalist it's 0020-4331? I'm not sure if these are the right ISBN/ISSN. As for CB, yup, sounds good :) Novice7 (talk) 06:49, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you so much! Thanks for supporting me Nathan :) Novice7 (talk) 06:59, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Wow, cool :) I'm searching for CB sources atm. Well, what about Tuesday (you'll be free, I guess?) I'll start assembling the stuff right away :) Novice7 (talk) 13:04, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks again. Btw, did you get the MC books you ordered? Also, good luck with the results :) What have you planned to do after finals (high school, isn't it?) Bachelor's degree or some professional course. Can you briefly explain the US educational system? Although I have some of cousins there, I don't know much about their schools lol. Novice7 (talk) 14:37, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, I don't the book names, but you said you have ordered them??? And, lol for mistaking you for a high school student :D It's the same here. We pass high school when we're 18 (although I'm 17 and already passed, just like you). Then, we can do Bachelor's Degree (three year course) and then Master's (two year). And, good luck with the career. I hope you get a good job! Novice7 (talk) 04:47, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks again. Btw, did you get the MC books you ordered? Also, good luck with the results :) What have you planned to do after finals (high school, isn't it?) Bachelor's degree or some professional course. Can you briefly explain the US educational system? Although I have some of cousins there, I don't know much about their schools lol. Novice7 (talk) 14:37, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Wow, cool :) I'm searching for CB sources atm. Well, what about Tuesday (you'll be free, I guess?) I'll start assembling the stuff right away :) Novice7 (talk) 13:04, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you so much! Thanks for supporting me Nathan :) Novice7 (talk) 06:59, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks! For Modern Drummer, it's 0194-4533 and for The Instrumentalist it's 0020-4331? I'm not sure if these are the right ISBN/ISSN. As for CB, yup, sounds good :) Novice7 (talk) 06:49, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- No, I just gave a notice to Adabow. I'll surely let you know when I leave :D Well, I'll be joining an engineering college soon and as you know, they just kill your mind, lol. I won't be able to concentrate on Wiki work... And, you're doing BG, Music and lyrics, Critical, chart? Novice7 (talk) 04:40, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
B'Day Anthology
Thanks, as usual, for the review. Everything is addressed (either done or contested). Adabow (talk · contribs) 23:57, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- Hehe, I aim to be as difficult as possible.... Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:02, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- OK, I think I got everything. Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:55, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
Hey
I have addressed all but one of your points from the S&M GA 1 Review, could you check the ones I have put a " Done" by please? calvin999 (talk) 14:36, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- And there isn't a H.A.T.E.U. single cover. calvin999 (talk) 00:46, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
Mariah Carey
Hi Nathan, are you looking forward to the new MC album? Got any info about it for me? :) Jayy008 (talk) 18:45, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Lol :), I didn't know any of that, so thanks! I'm definitely going to watch that interview when I have a minute. Jayy008 (talk) 11:58, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've seen the interview now and wow, I am excited! I hope Nick Cannon isn't just saying she's going back to her old stuff to create buzz. Now she's a mother, I do think she's done with the "sexy", I'm expecting a lot of 'Fantasy' type records, fun up tempo beats. Jayy008 (talk) 17:56, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Not much I can really say to that apart from I agree completely lol Jayy008 (talk) 17:20, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've seen the interview now and wow, I am excited! I hope Nick Cannon isn't just saying she's going back to her old stuff to create buzz. Now she's a mother, I do think she's done with the "sexy", I'm expecting a lot of 'Fantasy' type records, fun up tempo beats. Jayy008 (talk) 17:56, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
S&M
Hey, ok thanks. Yeah I created a Peer Review for S&M so that anyone could tell me (apart from the references) what else needed to be done, as I have addressed all your points GA Review 1 as well as from GA Review 2. I need time to go through 140 references lol. And for H.A.T.E.U., there is no more info on the web, literally what you see is there is what there is. There was probably more info when the song and video released, but they are long gone now. calvin999 (talk) 09:17, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yeah that sounds good :). I'm really into editing on here and do spend a lot of time on here (I have a 5 month summer holiday from University, so i need something to do!), but i am surprised at how hard it is to make an article GA. I find formatting the references the hardest, I'm more into the creative and writing. calvin999 (talk) 22:19, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, btw :). calvin999 (talk) 22:20, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
That comment above was for H.A.T.E.U., this one is for S&M lol (didn't see the your comment about it until i had responded about H.A.T.E.U.). I know that everything in a GA Review is for the articles interest, I just found the referencing comment a bit vague (and the other reviewer). Does saying "The reference section needs work" mean all 140+ references need correcting, or only ones from a certain section, and what specifically is wrong? Wrong order, missed out access date or something else etc. It's only because I haven't done this before, that I don't know what "reference section needs work" means and entails. calvin999 (talk) 22:39, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes that does help, thanks. What you just wrote I think would be really helpful in any GA review, just a few examples so the comment isn't so open and broad. I'll try and get to work on this today :) calvin999 (talk) 13:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've done the ones you said about, but i don't get why #55 and #57 hasn't italicised "Billboard" ? calvin999 (talk) 16:58, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
Other charted songs
Isn't this repeated twice on Britney's discography page, or I am blind? --demistalk 11:13, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you were a bit more attentive, you would see, that most of "Other charted songs" was added by me and I've got no reason for deleting it. But anyway, lets just get this out of mind. --demistalk 05:12, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I just will leave 2 links here. Before: http://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Britney_Spears_discography&oldid=423456354 and after http://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Britney_Spears_discography&oldid=425018778 --demistalk 05:33, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
4
From where? Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:14, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I hope i will not get viruses on my computer or else my mom will make a terrible secene. Lol. Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:20, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Leave me the link. Thanks. I have to go. We will talk later. Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:20, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Don't worry, you won't :) Let me know what you think!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 08:22, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I have not got it yet. Jivesh • Talk2Me 08:29, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I did not get it. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:59, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Is it free from viruses? Jivesh • Talk2Me 06:03, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you very much. Did you give "I Miss you" a try? Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:04, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
It's time
To start work on Charmbracelet. I've collected a few sources and will begin on June 13, 2011, promise! Btw, did you get the books (with info on "How Will I Know")? Also, I'll compile the article in my sandbox and then paste it into your sandbox?? What do you say?? As you can see, I make a lot of grammar errors (and still do. Even this message might have millions of errors, lol). Novice7 (talk) 10:56, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yup, that's it. The magazines are from 1985, I hope they're available :) Lol, I knew you saw it :D I couldn't reply before (as I said earlier, college preps catching up)... Me too, I'm 100% sure we can complete it by Friday?? I haven't heard a single song from 4... Maybe I should... Or, maybe I should wait till official release?? Novice7 (talk) 13:08, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Really? Wow.. That's bad. Do you know which newspaper/magazine/website published this article?? It has a lot of information. Oh, yes, by Friday.. Novice7 (talk) 13:30, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks Nat! I was listening to "Bringin' on the Heartbreak"... Man, such a lovely song and the notes from 3:18+ are just jaw dropping. Novice7 (talk) 13:40, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Of course I have :D An underrated album imo. There are some great songs on CB. God, please give us the old MC back!!!! Novice7 (talk) 13:48, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Don't worry, I pray for Nippy and MC everyday :D Tbh, I am not a big fan of 2005+ Mimi :) I know, betrayer, lol. I heard that too (Perez :P) I wish it is real.. I mean, God, Mimi back to 1990-1997 would be like heaven coming down! Novice7 (talk) 14:01, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Of course I have :D An underrated album imo. There are some great songs on CB. God, please give us the old MC back!!!! Novice7 (talk) 13:48, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks Nat! I was listening to "Bringin' on the Heartbreak"... Man, such a lovely song and the notes from 3:18+ are just jaw dropping. Novice7 (talk) 13:40, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Really? Wow.. That's bad. Do you know which newspaper/magazine/website published this article?? It has a lot of information. Oh, yes, by Friday.. Novice7 (talk) 13:30, 12 June 2011 (UTC)