User talk:Pea Crisp

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Hello, Pea Crisp, and Welcome to Wikipedia!

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Sandbox

I created the sandbox for you at: User:Pea Crisp/Sandbox and copied over the content from School belonging, without the good article icon and the categories.

Feel free to work away there.–CaroleHenson (talk) 04:28, 7 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sandbox for Belongingness

I created User:Pea Crisp/Sandbox2 for Belongingness for you. If you didn't see, thanks so much for the Barnstar on my talk page, that was really nice of you.–CaroleHenson (talk) 04:08, 13 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Two more sandboxes

Here are two more sandboxes for further work:

Thanks for all your hard work on this!–CaroleHenson (talk) 22:47, 13 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, CaroleHenson. This is greatly appreciated. I have finished editing both pages now. Please let me know if you would like further changes. Unfortunately, I cannot upload the Figure to the school belonging page (even though it is found on the belongingness page). Wikipedia has restricted my ability to do this. You will see a new section that describes the model. This is where the Figure could be included at a later date. I am not sure if you are able to insert it?

I will move the edits over to the articles.

Done–CaroleHenson (talk) 04:36, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

What was the reason that you could not upload the photo?

Was there an error message that there is an existing image? If so, we can take care of that by getting the existing one removed.
A problem with the license?
Not all fields completed?
Something else?–CaroleHenson (talk) 04:14, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

HiCaroleHensonthank you for the changes you have made. Regarding the picture, this is the error message:

We could not determine whether this file is suitable for Wikimedia Commons. Please only upload photos that you took yourself with your camera, or see what else is acceptable. See the guide to make sure the file is acceptable and learn how to upload it on Wikimedia Commons.

What do you think? --- Pea Crisp

Okay, good. It's something with the information entered.

If you go to https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Special:UploadWizard

Then, select the files to share, which should be in some kind of digital format (.gif, .jpeg, .png - etc.)

After it uploads, you will see a green checkmark. Click "Continue" (lower right hand corner)

Select "This file is my own work."

Select "Choose another license" (I think that's what it says)

Select the license you want and make sure your Commons username (not your actual name) is in the box for the license approval info. Then when you click next, it should upload the file.

Have you been able to get that far?–CaroleHenson (talk) 01:48, 15 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great instructions, Carole CaroleHenson Thank you!

You might want to adjust location and size though.

Many thanks.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Pea Crisp (talk • contribs)

Hi Pea Crisp,

Yes, I made some changes in this edit: Using full names for people, rather than just their last names, because many readers will include the general public who are not familiar with key researchers and authors. I added a citation, too.

Similarly, I changed this sentence to "A meta-analysis of 51 studies (N = 67,378) by K. Allen and colleagues (2018)" - with at least a first initial and changed Colleagues to colleagues.

I changed the size of the image because some people will be using devices that won't manage a large image well. If someone wants to see a bigger view of the image, they just need to click on the image.

I moved the image inline with the text (versus following the text), per guidelines for image placement. See Help:Pictures for more information.

As a side comment, I have also been making changes to punctuation and citation placement. Citation should follow commas or periods, as applicable.

...they did not belong to their school[12].

...they did not belong to their school [12].

instead: ...they did not belong to their school.[12]

Great job! The article has really come along!–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:59, 15 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AMAZING work, Carole. If I can help with future updates please let me know. Thank you for everything you have done. I have learnt a lot from you!— Preceding unsigned comment added by Pea Crisp (talk • contribs)

It was my pleasure. It was great to get these articles updated so quickly!–CaroleHenson (talk) 17:06, 16 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]