User talk:PaintballGuy973/Shooter game

I would like to add more pictures and edit the other sections of the articles, adding more information and replacing unnecessary information. PaintballGuy973 (talk) 05:57, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, but you want to focus on adding more peer-reviewed academic sources (the DiGRA confernece paper is ok, but the other source is not academic). As you don't seem to be doing much copyediting (which is fine) or restructuring (also fine), but that means you need to add more substantive content drawing on academic research.Adrishaw (talk) 21:09, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]