User talk:Orodriguezr
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[edit]Hello, Orodriguezr, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:44, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
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You have really good information and details. I would suggest that you might want to add more sources to make you're text more reliable.
Madisondaoust (talk) 03:27, 5 March 2020 (UTC)
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I really liked how described that Animal Art is a relationship built by man to understand both animals and humans. You had great information and the only thing I would have added are sources.
Helenandrews86 (talk) 03:46, 5 March 2020 (UTC)
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I think you have a good beginning for animal art, but I think adding some more details or examples of how and when animals starting emerging in artwork along with some references or links would greatly improve the quality of your research.
Laurenk17 (talk) 00:43, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
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The Original Barnstar |
| Good information, just make sure to include your references to give credit to the sources you used. Also, make sure to include you are talking about African art because it is not mentioned at all. You have some grammatical errors like "materials that were us" to "used" "king will be crown" to "crowned" "sculptures where pigment" to "were:" other than that good work. Mariamelia Zaragoza (talk) 22:12, 22 March 2020 (UTC) |
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The Technical Barnstar |
| Great start. I think you can add just a little bit more information. There is also a way to create a bigger header in the sandbox that will make it stand out a little more. Overall, great start! Adellert (talk) 02:36, 23 March 2020 (UTC) |
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Hi there! I would just dive right into what animal art is and known for, no need to have the headings above. I would also add the your sources into the writing. Nice job on talking about the different kinds of materials used.