User talk:OrangeFig52
Hi there, Welcome to my talk page! I have edited wikipedia anonymously for many years but am creating an account. Drop me a note to say hi and discuss topics of interest and/or ways in which I can help. OrangeFig52 (talk) 10:17, 17 July 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Thanks for the strawberries, the article might still be nominated by someone for WP:AFD. To improve it there needs to be less praise of her accomplishments and replaced with factual descriptions of what she has done, thanks Atlantic306 (talk) 14:32, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the suggestion Atlantic306. I will try to improve it and seek your guidance. I have read through the references and the only thing is that many of the articles themselves use language that praises the subject! She has been described using adjectives like "pioneer", "child prodigy", "visionary" and "legend" etc. I have tried to remove such language but can you help me by making a sample edit of a specific sentence. I will then try to model my future edits based on how you write it. Thank you again! OrangeFig52 (talk) 05:21, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
- Hi, I made some changes to make it more neutral, feel free to change it as you see fit, thanks Atlantic306 (talk) 13:21, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
- Hi Atlantic306, Greatly appreciate your edits to help me learn. I will try and refine it further. OrangeFig52 (talk) 05:53, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
- Hi, I made some changes to make it more neutral, feel free to change it as you see fit, thanks Atlantic306 (talk) 13:21, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
Hi OrangeFig52! I just wanted to let you know that I am still planning on going through the article to spruce it up a little bit and remove that banner. I just haven't had the time to really sit down and do it this week. I should have plenty of time this weekend though. I just want to make sure you knew I wasn't just ignoring it. --Majora (talk) 02:58, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
Thank you, Majora! Happy Friday! I was also caught up with a lot of deadlines during the week. Please let me know if/how I can help. Thanks again... OrangeFig52 (talk) 02:34, 7 October 2017 (UTC)