User talk:Omakofsky/Hand tool

Peer review

The article is well planned out and and there are good, detailed edits. I really like the additions of the tables, which makes it easier to understand the timeline and uses of different types of tools. The uses of new sources was thorough and really added to the credibility of the article. I would have like to see some of the pictures you mentioned in your brainstorm. I feel like it would have been nice to see the pictures that went alongside your descriptions of the different types of tools across history. Lastly, at the end you mention the different ages such as the Bronze age and the stone age and what they were. I feel like you could change that to something along the lines of "in each new age, the material used for tools was different, but similar in idea to the earliest tools" and then link the different Wikipedia articles of the ages. Smcc789 (talk) 16:37, 11 November 2021 (UTC)