User talk:Oldag07/sandbox

Texas Revolution

I've expanded the section a bit and added sources for the information that was previously unsourced. This could probably be cut down. One worry I have is that it so far concentrates only on the battles, and says almost nothing about the political side of the revolution. I haven't finished doing the research on the political stuff (particularly the impeachment of Smith/dissolution of the first legislature, the Convention of 1836 and the signing of the Texas Declaration of Independence), so I'm not sure exactly what ought to be included for that yet. Karanacs (talk) 16:16, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Karanacs, you did a really good job. I guess i could have been of more help by including all the content on the revolution already on the main page. The only stuff I posted was battles because that was what was primary lacking. While your paragraphs are way too long for the Texas page, it should fit quite nicely into the History of Texas page. I am going to do some more trimming for the main Texas page, but for now, thanks Oldag07 (talk) 20:50, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Posted them on the History page. still working on the Texas page.