User talk:Nthom25
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[edit]Hello, Nthom25, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:25, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
Picking articles
[edit]Dont forget to practice talk page editing by introducing yourself on a classmates talk page. Now it is time to choose an article to create or edit. Pick 3-5 potential articles and list them below. A good place to start is WikiProject Mass spectrometry. At the bottom of the page is the table of articles by quality and importance (also here) and the list of popular pages (also here). Pick out some interesting stub ([1]) or start ([2]) class articles that you might like to edit. --Kkmurray (talk) 17:00, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Potential Articles
[edit]- Electron capture ionization- Stub: This article can use more information.
- Sonic spray ionization- Stub: This is only a part of the article Ion source.
- Thermal ionization mass spectrometry- Start: This article could use more information on applications with more references.
- Thermospray- Start: This article can go into more detail.
- Surface-enhanced laser desorption/ionization- Start: This article can use more references and information. Nthom25 (talk) 01:48, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
Electron capture ionization will be a good article to edit. --Kkmurray (talk) 15:03, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Comments on Bibliography
[edit]Commenting on this version: [3]: Refs 1 and 2 are primary sources and not ideal (see WP:PRIMARY). Ref 4 is electron capture dissociation not electron capture ionization. See doi:10.1021/es505993z for a review. You will also want to integrate your article with electron capture detector. --Kkmurray (talk) 18:52, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
License tagging for File:Gas chromatography electron capture detector.gif
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Reviewing
[edit]HELLO
[edit]First of all, i would like to thank you for your effort and improvement the article.Also i would like to highlight the strong points:
1- your improvements added more references.
2- you didnot have grammatical errors.
3- your addition were clear structurally.
4-you were neutral in your writing.
5-you are using tertiary sources.
== But I have some suggestion that can help improve your editing ==
1-The lead section can reflect more about the most important sections in the article.
2-The article need more coverage about the topic, such as: how the EC used with CI, how the EC can be used with gas chromatography, how the EC detector works.
3- you can add more supporting materials such as:EC detector image with or without gas chromatography.
4-You can add more internal links,e.g.molecular ions and electron ionization.
Gabdal1 (talk) 16:06, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
Hello Nancy,
Please when you move your article to main space let me know.--174.64.0.15 (talk) 13:36, 12 April 2016 (UTC)