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Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander Skwortsow (November 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

AI generated.

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qcne (talk) 12:28, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Nskwortsow! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! qcne (talk) 12:28, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, this is not ai-generated. Please see www.skwortsow.com for the original source. This website has been online since the late 90s and I updated it in 2010 when my father (Alexander Skwortsow) passed away. Nskwortsow (talk) 12:31, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Nskwortsow, thanks for letting me know. It reads like AI-generated text as it has the flowery overly complex prose common to AI chat bots. However, Wikipedia articles need to be written in a strictly neutral point of view so this would need a total re-write.

We also require more sources to establish notability: we need significant coverage in multiple, independent, reliable sources such as magazines, books, or newspapers.

Let me know if you have any more questions. qcne (talk) 12:47, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I've update the language to make it more neutral, and I've added 2 references. Nskwortsow (talk) 12:56, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Nskwortsow, sorry - the two sources you added don't provide enough notability.

ssorchestra just lists him, so not significant coverage. violinist.com is okay to source his death, but we're still trying to establish notability.

Ideally we're looking for critical review, discussion, commentary?

The references tutorial is at WP:INTREFVE for you to format your references properly. qcne (talk) 14:05, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added another reference, from a major German composer from the 20th century (Hummel). Nskwortsow (talk) 14:47, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The letter doesn't seem to mention Alexander? qcne (talk) 15:27, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander Skwortsow (November 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See comments on your talk page.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Alexander Skwortsow and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

qcne (talk) 14:05, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]