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Suggestions for HMB436 Assignment

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Hi Nrezvany,

I am one of your classmate for HMB436. Your article is quite concise, and direct (which I do like). There are still a few suggestions I want to make.

Try to carefully organize the facts into their proper sections, because it will be easier for the readers to find the necessary and relevant information Hope you enjoy this course.

Tim (talk) 17:10, 24 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]