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Hi Novelli2020, this is looking really good! Here are some thoughts:

Publication titles are italicized (Business Courier, Michigan Chronicle)
I think the lead is a little sparse. It's supposed to be a synopsis of the rest of the article--think of it like an abstract. Think about what details from the body you can repeat in the lead.

You did a great job of citing your sources and adding internal links to other Wikipedia articles. I think once you add another sentence or two to the lead, you'll be able to follow the instructions in the training for moving the work out of your sandbox! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:09, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Elysia (Wiki Ed), Thanks Elysia! Novelli2020 (talk) 19:39, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]