User talk:NoraAaron

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! hajat vrc @ 23:22, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome to Wikipedia! Need a hand?

Hello! NoraAaron, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! hajat vrc @ 23:23, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jackie Brookner.
To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the help desk, via real time chat with helpers, or on the reviewer's talk page

Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! TheSpecialUser ^TSU 07:41, 24 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Talk Back

Hello, NoraAaron. You have new messages at TheSpecialUser's talk page.
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TheSpecialUser ^TSU 16:50, 27 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Jackie_Brookner

As I promised, here is the problem that I see. Section; Dreher Park Art and Design, West Palm Beach, FL with Angelo Ciotti (2003–04), Laughing Brook, Salway Park, Cincinatti, Ohio (2002–09), Art and Community Landscapes (2002–03) and he Gift of Water, Grossenhain, Germany (2001) as well as Teaching are not sourced. I see that there are few external links in some sections which should be removed. I'm happy to pass the submission to article space once you provide sources for those sections :) TheSpecialUser ^TSU 05:33, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for your suggestions! I've revised the article and removed the external links and have inserted sources for the sections you've identified. Please let me know if this suffices! I've posted this note on my & your talk pages. NoraAaron (talk) 04:16, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Jackie Brookner, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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TheSpecialUser ^TSU 10:14, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]