User talk:NoamKosofsky/sandbox
I like what you have so far and your objective tone is excellent. Very straightforward and you're clearly taking into account how similar pages on Wikipedia are organized which will go a long way in ensuring that your edits stay put once you add them to the page. Your sources are good, but some more variety would be desirable at some point down the line. All the information you have added seems to be important to the subject and there's little "fluff", but I am concerned that finding good sources for information about the relations beyond the economic aspect may be difficult to come by and even more difficult to ensure objectivity in. Keep that in mind as you look to expand the information you have here. - Nathan Glugla
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