User talk:Nkmerr28/sandbox
- Suggest condensing the locations down to a region and maybe a few states. In the first sentence, it already states where this type of tree grows, I do not know if it is necessary to expand so much later on in the next section ForestGreenSweater (talk) 14:53, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
review
[edit]Introduction
- "found from Maine south to Georgia" change "Maine south" to southern Maine"
- "Because of their large north-south range, the trees are associated with a wide variety other wetland species." Flip both clauses of the sentence so that you don't start the sentence with a conjunction.
Distribution and habitat - things i would change
- No need to list all states, geographical locations could be consolidated into general regions while emphasizing that they are located along coastal lands
- add historical section, how they ended up where they are now would make a nice transition into this section
- remove geographical locations of wildlife refuges if you link to them
I would also review any grammatical mistakes in other section that i might have missed
RemyLukeBirnbaum (talk) 15:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
Grammar of the following sentence could be improved (two verbs in one sentence) "...is a species of Chamaecyparis, native to the Atlantic coast of North America is found from Maine south to Georgia..." Truong.ci (talk) 15:23, 25 March 2016 (UTC)