User talk:Niuma123

Pomona Zipser article

Hi @Drmies I am trying to improve the Pomona Zipser article that was previously started by someone else. I am new to Wikipedia and would like to try to improve an existing, previously rejected draft. Because I know some German and i am interested in art i tried to edit the pomona Zipser one.

@DRmies I understand that you previously rejected this article. i want to better understand what more I can improve. can i ask what do you mean by it being a resume? And should i delete the content connected to the awards where the city website is cited? I also read this guide and i am trying to follow it to the best of my abilities. i am new and still learning so any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you in advance.

Ps. if you have any advice when it comes to selecting other articles to edit that have something to do with german artists please let me know Niuma123 (talk) 22:34, 3 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I can't help but wonder how a brand-new editor lands on that article, but soit. A resume is a chronological list of things/achievements/etc. An encyclopedic biography--well, you can go read some of them on Wikipedia. It's not a list. Oh, content here typically needs to have secondary sourcing, not a link to some website. The best way to learn about Wikipedia editing is to do it, and to read our articles--particularly good articles and featured articles. Good luck, Drmies (talk) 01:34, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]