User talk:Nevshupa

It's a gas

Looking at this, I'd say it's a good start. Delete the two top headers, & add a ==Sources== header below your 1st 'graph. Delete the commas between footnotes (no need). Link the technical terms. The biggest problem appears to be conflict of interest: you appear to be citing yourself... You'd be better off relying on other sources. TREKphiler ^{any time you're ready, Uhura} 23:06, 23 July 2011 (UTC)