User talk:Nammii/Acanthurus achilles
Peer review
[edit]General info
- Whose work are you reviewing?
Nammii
- Link to draft you're reviewing
https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=User:Nammii/Acanthurus_achilles&oldid=1147126360
Hi Nammii, I'm sorry I'm getting this to you so late it turns out I uploaded the review to the wrong place so I'm re uploading it here.
Content
"Fish like this one mainly come from" Sounds weird since "like" is in it. Maybe just reword it to "The Acanthurus achilles come from a family called Acanthuridae"
Most of the information added seems to be mainly about how to take care of them, which is great but there should be more information about the fish like say it's reproduction cycle or it's predators if it has any.
Organization
The section Habitat and Distribution & Description are very well written and look great
Sources and References
I don't see any sources, I'm sure all your information is right but it needs sources. Esarraf (talk) 07:43, 7 April 2023 (UTC)