User talk:NamakaOK/Effie Lee Morris/Mimabe06 Peer Review

This is so helpful, thank you! Sorry for the delay in responding, but your comments sent me on a frenzy of library searches for better sources. I was relieved to find a stack of books and long list of journal articles that will improve the citations from the original article and expand the content of my revision. I really appreciate your specific suggestions on improving the lead and overall content. Thank you! NamakaOK (talk) 21:57, 1 December 2019 (UTC)