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Hi. Welcome to my talk page. --Nadinesharm (talk) 16:54, 28 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Errors in Articles

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There is a citation error in the article Women's rights in Saudi Arabia. Citation 55 is not properly cited with all the necessary information that is needed for citing an external work piece. --Nadinesharm (talk) 17:53, 28 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In the article Popular culture. There is a section titled Popular culture#Folklore that contains a number of different information regarding this topic but not any citations presented in this piece to provide where this information is coming from. This needs to be updated so we are able to know where this information has come from.--Nadinesharm (talk) 16:33, 5 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In the article Icicle, there is a sentence that could be restructured to make better sense. It is in the section Formation and Dynamics where they talk about the influences that shape icicles. In the sentence where they state that it is also influenced by melting water, it can be clarified by adding that the icicle is influenced by melting water so that sentence does not seem like a fragment. --Nadinesharm (talk) 16:40, 5 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In the article Mean Girls. There is a grammatical error found in the Plot section. There needs to be a comma where it states that Cady meets new classmates (comma necessary after that) then the names of her two friends she has made. --Nadinesharm (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]