User talk:Mxx boss

Your submission at Articles for creation: FireFLY (LifeIsGood) (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This still needs any more available coverage overall. Cheers,

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SwisterTwister talk 08:26, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: FireFLY (LifeIsGood) (November 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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SwisterTwister talk 06:13, 11 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:FireFLY (LifeIsGood) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:FireFLY (LifeIsGood). Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 07:43, 20 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: FireFLY (LifeIsGood) (December 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission's references do not adequately evidence the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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LaMona (talk) 18:42, 17 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: FireFLY (LifeIsGood) (April 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

I tried to do some editing, but I honestly am having trouble understanding the article. The article must be about the group, but there seems to be a lot here about Jay as a producer. That should go into an article about him; this article needs to be about the group, with a short bio for each of them. I removed to story about the tattoo model, as not relevant here, and I suspect that the section on their "motto" should be reduced to a sentence or two in the body of the article. I'm not convinced it is worthy of attention other than being a marketing phrase.

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LaMona (talk) 18:36, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Mxx boss, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LaMona (talk) 18:36, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]