User talk:Musketeer 13/sandbox

At the moment, I'm still working at finding more solid references for the article. If you have any recommendations or advice, feel free to drop them here.

Looking good so far, but yes, you need to make sure there's at least one reference in each paragraph, so it's clear what's being summarised. Beware of vague phrases like "significant impact", "Commonly," "An individual’s experience of foreign cultures can be largely shaped by ...". With these broad statements, there's always a risk of over-reach. Ask yourself what the nature of the evidence for these statements is, and what specifically does it say. If a study shows an individual's attitudes to foreign cultures being affected by a specific intervention, then report just that result rather than broadening it out to a more vague statement. I think there's an issue with reference formatting, which I'll try to sort out myself. Cheers, MartinPoulter (talk) 13:55, 29 June 2013 (UTC)