User talk:Mtlang13/sandbox

Third paragraph of first section could use some expansion. What is a block club? What is the concern? Glgaebl (talk) 13:56, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Great job guys! Just a suggestion, under the History section you could potentially include a (founders) sub heading. Also maybe something to think about in the Campaigns section is organizing the dates in chronological order. For example EITP may have started or came before POWER or CCSCLA/Schools...Another thing that could remedy this might just be to put the dates of these events in parenthesis after the subheading. I.e. EITP (1997-Current) Just something to think about. I really like the Environmental Justice and CCSCLA section, like how EJ is connected to the organization and how you identify that in this section. Glen wuz here (talk) 14:10, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

There's a lot going on here- is some of this your annotated bibliography? Consider combining some sections or linking to other wikis instead of creating a whole new subsection. Gmhardesty (talk) 14:14, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

What were the community conflicts with the school mentioned under affordable housing? Was it only that the school would eliminate some of the affordable housing or were there other ways that the new school did not serve the community? Was it a public school, charter, private? Was another school needed by the community? Was the school relocated or just never built?

What is meant by 'health literacy' under public health? Is this a reference to community members ability to read in general? Or is this a reference to community members not being well informed on issues related to health? Or is this related to technical jargon that is often used by people talking or writing about health issues and that community members don't understand that jargon? ScroatScroat (talk) 14:19, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]