User talk:Mrwriter19

Loghman Madayen moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Loghman Madayen (activist). Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has too many problems of language or grammar. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. 14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 20:52, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello dear, Thank you for giving me your time. More than a few months ago, I made a draft page. I improved it And applied for a transfer about a month ago But not handled! I requested a direct transfer but my account seems not to have enough access. Now I hit it directly and thought it was right. Is it possible to read my final draft and confirm if it is suitable? I will send you the link. I appreciate your kindness.

https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Draft%3ALoghman_Madayen&veswitched=1&oldid=1209975387&action=edit Mrwriter19 (talk) 21:15, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mrwriter19

The correct version is at Draft:Loghman Madayen (activist). The draft you link contains some blatant grammar and formatting mistakes, which in the draft I linked have been corrected. By the way, if I can ask you, did you translate the article from somewhere using an automatic translation? If so, read WP:TRANSLATE before proceeding. Anyway also in the "correct" draft there are many language inadequacies, which must be fixed before publishment.

Kind regards 14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 22:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your reply, The message I sent to you a few hours ago was using Google's automatic translator As this message is using translator But the draft page was completely translated by my colleague So I use your advice And I edit grammar mistakes to make my first essay perfect.

Thank you, have a nice day. Mrwriter19 (talk) 00:15, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mrwriter19 Thanks for your answer. I add that Wikipedia articles are not "essays" (see WP:NOTESSAY) but encyclopedic articles, written in a formal, neutral and objective tone.

Kind regards 14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 19:34, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Loghman Madayen (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 14 novembre was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Loghman Madayen (activist), which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The page I linked is identical, except that some blatant errors have been fixed. So I suggest working there and abandoning this one

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Loghman Madayen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 22:24, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Mrwriter19! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 22:24, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Loghman Madayen (activist) (May 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Direct blockquotes are excessive and need to be removed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Loghman Madayen (activist) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

~Liance^talk 00:43, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Hello, Mrwriter19, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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