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Jazz

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I would invite you to rewrite (condense, clarify, whatever) the opening I contributed to the Jazz article rather than simply junk it. The article is so huge that it needs some kind of overview at the start: otherwise the reader wades through thousands of words about 1920s arcana without any clue about what jazz is or why anyone would care: & the description of improvisation only occurs right at the very end after 43K of material! I may not have dealt with these problems ideally but just reverting the piece doesn't help improve the article one whit (& it's already one that many people have suggested needs an overhaul, which is what I was trying to respond to in the first place). ND 06:12, 24 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sarehole

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Sarehole was in Worcestershire at the time Tolkien lived there. See BCC page. Surprisingly, Worcestershire extended all the way north to Yardley. I have reverted your three edits. Oosoom Talk to me 14:34, 20 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]