User talk:Mr. Senfai/sandbox

Feed back

Hey, I read through your post, and I see that it is looking fantastic! You do have limited sources, and a lot of facts down below on your page, perhaps try integrating a few points? I think a few diagrams of the mechanism would help as well, or a few balanced equations, and I think you're well on your way! D.jae.lee (talk) 10:25, 2 March 2015 (UTC)