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Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (June 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dodger67 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 21:08, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Moswanted123, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 21:08, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (June 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The article must be built from information found in third-party sources (newspapers, magazines) that are independent of the subject of the article. Those sources must be referenced in-line with the text they support. No un-referenced material is allowed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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LaMona (talk) 19:18, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (July 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tseung Kwan O was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Problems pointed out by the previous reviewer still apply.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Tseung Kwan O Let's talk 21:19, 11 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:MBB SE

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A tag has been placed on Draft:MBB SE requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be a clear copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from http://www.mbb.com/en/about-us/mission.html. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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MBB SE

I had a look at Draft:MBB SE. A lot of it is copied from the company's website, which is a WP:Copyvio problem, so it's going to be deleted. If you're working for the company and have permission to use those sentences, then you need to first declare your "conflict of interest" and comply with the foundation:Terms of Use about paid contributors, and then get official e-mail messages sent from the company to our record tracking system to get permission recorded and everything un-deleted. The directions for that process are at WP:DONATETEXT.

Either way, I'd be happy to see you re-create it in your own words. Please try to write from the perspective of someone who wants to know what the company does. I see words like "technological and engineering expertise", but just what do they do? Do they sell services or products? Is it food or computers or cars or what? Nobody would ever know from that. But if you wrote something like "This subsidiary makes factory equipment, another one makes toilet paper, and the last one makes mattresses", then readers would probably learn something about the business. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:53, 6 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE has been accepted

MBB SE, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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DGG ( talk ) 20:20, 6 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

And also re-written to remove the obvious copyvios. Thanks, DGG. WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:42, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]