User talk:Mmunderwood
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Howdy!
[edit]Hey, Molly! See you in class on Friday!--ObnoxiousAdri (talk) 03:58, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
--Hey, Molly! It has been fun getting to know you these past few weeks!--Emuetzel1 (talk) 20:19, 16 February 2018 (UTC) ---Hey, Molly! How you been?--Lahnano (talk) 20:33, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
Articles that need improvement
[edit]- According to the talk board, improper citations and links
- Some poor grammar, copy editing needed
- Scarce content; needs a lot of supplementation
- Needs "citations from reliable sources"
- Controversial image, may (or may not) need replacement
- Awkward sentence structure; some copy editing needed
Organization and Leads
[edit]While this article has lots of important information, it's organization isn't chronological, which makes the most sense as a structure for this type of article. There are also lists that seem out of place, and would fit better in the article if they were integrated into the paragraphs (or at least specified per decade).
This article is short, and the subsections (Design and Deployments) seem a bit random, and definitely not explanatory. The organization of this article will likely come into form when more information is found/added, as this will fill in gaps about the JumboTron that both I and the reader of the article are seeking to understand.
Welcome!
[edit]Hello, Mmunderwood, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:23, 16 March 2018 (UTC)