User talk:Mikin83/Johnny's West

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

You have done some very impressive work. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo!

That said, you might find it helpful to compare your approach to a high-quality article like BTS -- one difference I notice is that the BTS article tends to have paragraphs that weave the information into a more narrative form, rather than tables or lists of information. To be clear, your work is great -- but I wanted to give you an example to think about to help you make it even better.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 19:47, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi Kaylea, Thanks for the feedback! I will continue to improve the article :) Mikin83 (talk) 22:00, 27 January 2022 (UTC).

Go-Live Approval

Hi!

I think you should make this article live when you're ready. Reminder of our go-live steps....

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Celebrate!

This is a big article, so take your time with the merger. Great work! Kaylea Champion (talk) 22:27, 5 February 2022 (UTC)