User talk:MikeBarron/ClearCube
My first draft was rejected as blatant advertising. After reviewing this criterion and also the guidelines for spam, I've rewritten the draft. Areas that I've improved include:
- Neutral point of view
- twice included references to other vendors of similar products
- in several places removed descriptive text that might be considered "promoting"
- More encyclopedic
- distinguished PC blades from server blades
- defined the term connection broker
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