User talk:Michelleg0296
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Sam's Peer Review
[edit]You give a clear explanation of what Environmental Impact Design is. I think I'd like to read a bit more about the examples you give. Some specifics about how this type of design was implemented in which positive externalities came about. Also, it seems like there is a mathematical element to EID. Perhaps a formula or some more numerical elements would strengthen your entry. I can tell you use your own words, so this is a great start to your final draft. I think a few more details and you will be in good shape. I took a look at your sources and they pass my credibility test.
Sadondakis (talk) 19:38, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
Caleb's Peer Review
[edit]I like your definition of EID. It's very easily understandable and very encyclopedic. However, I'd like to read more about the examples of positive impacts of the EID's. I think you could organize that section a little better as well. I would also like to know a little more information of the three types of impacts. Overall, a very good start to the final draft.