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Your submission at Articles for creation: Javier Zaruski (December 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrowssapSMM was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
DrowssapSMM 14:49, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Hi, where you able to review this article? thank you Medianextgen (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Javier Zaruski

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Medianextgen (talk) 23:38, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

User:Medianextgen ^^ thetechie@enwiki: ~/talk/ $ 23:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm guessing that you are looking for help with your draft. Being a professional and a world champion in just about any sport should translate into meeting notability criteria.
Your draft, however, exhibits several very bad problems that are preventing it from being accepted.
Number one is the apparent copying from one of your sources, https://www.bjjheroes.com/bjj-fighters/javier-zaruski
You have copied multiple sentences verbatim. And since BJJ Fighters is a copyrighted site, that copying will have to be addressed by removal from the history.
Number two is the problem of promotional or at least non-neutral language in the draft. Your writing makes it clear you admire this fighter, but Wikipedia should not be seen as having that point of view - it must remain neutral, and so must your writing.
The other issue is one I won't be able to fully address here. Do your sources establish Zaruski is notable, according to Wikipedia's criteria. I see that you are using lots of sources, some of the multiple times (hint: see WP:NAMEDREFS for how to handle this) and in some cases piling up 3 or more references for a single statement. Most of the time, a statement should be supported by a single source; it's fairly rare where two would be needed. Any time I see three or more footnotes ganged together, it's a sign that you're likely doing something wrong. I question whether BFF Heroes as a site is able to support notability, even if we grant that it hosts reliable stats for the sport. You cannot copy their bio - you need to base your biography on independent reporting about him. — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 01:22, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank yo so much for your detailed feedback! I will address this issues and get back to you Medianextgen (talk) 17:29, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Javier Zaruski (May 4)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 16:07, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Javier Zaruski has been accepted

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