User talk:Meaghanmcgowan4502
"He became deeply involved in his high school drama department, which he says looked fun." -> Which was fun? I don't understand how he can be involved yet say it "looked fun." I would add a link to this Wiki Page The Secret Affairs of Mildred Wild... there are several others, some I was able to find and some I wasn't "He eventually moved to New York City in 2002, which he describes as the smartest decision he made for his career." Why was moving to New York City the greatest decision Castillo has ever made or at least briefly explain this before you transition to your next section. "He also considered moving to Los Angeles as well but he decided on New York after he was stuck in an rush hour traffic jam in Houston one day and realized that he did not want to have to deal with bad traffic on a daily basis as he would have if he moved to LA. [5][18]" -> This sentence is a bit long... maybe separate it? Also is this really necessary to mention? I really like how you went in depth about Castillo's acting career and personal life. I also found it useful to see all of his theatrical performances in a large table. Jonajarro15 (talk) 19:50, 19 April 2017 (UTC)