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Ted T. Tanouye

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Hi Mdunn30, I've taken a look at Ted T. Tanouye. I've assessed it as a Start class article, but believe that it is very close to B class. For B class, it needs at least one in line citation per paragraph. This includes the Medal of Honor citation. Please add them to the following paragraphs:

  • First paragraph of the Biography section where it discusses where he was born and worked;
  • Third paragraph of Biography section where it talks about him shipping out to Europe;
  • Fifth and sixth paragraphs discussing Hill 140 and when he died;
  • Second last paragraph of Biography section where it mentions the investiture.

I know it seems like overkill, but it is the only way to ensure readers know exactly where all the information came from. If you can include these, it should be able to be assessed as B class. If you wish to use the same reference multiple times, this can be done by following the guidance at WP:NAMEDREFS. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me on my talk page, or I'm sure any of the other project co-ordinators would also be happy to help. Thanks for your contribution, by the way. I hope to see you around more. Cheers. — AustralianRupert (talk) 23:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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AustralianRupert (talk) 16:37, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]