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16:04, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your contribution to Lil' Kim. I've been trying to re-write the text you added but I'm having difficulty. Because Wikipedia is written in a formal style, contractions like "wasn't" are not used. As well, cliches like "paving the way" and "the rap game" are avoided. Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch has more detail, as do other parts of the Manual of Style. Would you mind taking a try at re-writing "Lil' Kim has been credited for paving the way for females to embrace their 'sexuality and femininity' in a way that wasn't widely appreciated in a time when the rap game was dominated with males"? Thank you. Magnolia677 (talk) 23:57, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

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Hello, Maxwell King123321, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, your edit to Pink Friday does not conform to Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy (NPOV). Wikipedia articles should refer only to facts and interpretations that have been stated in print or on reputable websites or other forms of media.

There's a page about the NPOV policy that has tips on how to effectively write about disparate points of view without compromising the NPOV status of the article as a whole. If you are stuck, and looking for help, please come to the Questions page, where experienced Wikipedians can answer any queries you have! Or, click here to ask for help on your talk page, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Below are a few other good links for newcomers:

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you have any questions, check out Wikipedia:Questions or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome!  → Lil-℧niquԐ 1 - { Talk } - 13:14, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Luke Mullen (February 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Sulfurboy were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Sulfurboy (talk) 08:32, 23 February 2020 (UTC)