User talk:Man.Mich/sandbox

Dashamena Peer review

Overall you seem to have a lot of ideas that you can contribute to your article, but just keep expanding and giving detail to those ideas instead of listing them. Expansion on those notes will give your article and your future readers much more to learn and branch from. Also i would use the citation tool Wikipedia provides for referencing links instead of listing the URL in the middle of the text. Lastly, explain your use of abbreviations just because it will be more clear for your readers. Overall just keep expanding because i can tell you have a lot of ideas in production!

Thanks Man.Mich (talk) 21:07, 28 November 2018 (UTC)