User talk:MaSoKiPo
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[edit]Hello, MaSoKiPo, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
Your article
[edit]Hi. I moved your article back to your sandbox because it's not yet ready to go live. The article needs to show the importance of the church, why it's notable enough to have a stand-alone article, and at present the article does not do this.
Right now you have a list of pastors, but there's nothing about who they are or what they did, and when you do have information about them, it's not relevant to the church. Instead, you should focus on writing a paragraph or two about anyone who you can say something about their role in the church. Your account is also very incomplete - outside of the third sentence in the lead, your account ends in the 1880s. That's just too incomplete.
Keep in mind as well that your article needs to be based primarily on reliable third party sources about the church. Right now you seem to rely on primary source material, most of which isn't about the church itself. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:58, 18 March 2021 (UTC)