Does this draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? YES
Are the points included verifiable with cited published material? NO – You referred to a clinical trial that you know is going on at UCSF but can’t be accessed by the Wiki population.
What recommendations can you provide your colleague for improvement of their draft? For this portion, please consider both the editor’s goals and focus of their edits along with Wikipedia’s principles and Wikipedia manual of style for medicine-related articles. (100 words max) You said the goals of your edits were to improve the section about the potential side effects of ginseng. Most of your edits were to the section of the page about the various dosage forms in which ginseng is available, though. M dee gee (talk) 10:58, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
